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Hi Yuko
Thanks for your email. It’s great that you can visit our this year. There’s lots to do in New York. My favourite season is spring. It’s warm and sun. You can go walking in the parks and gardens. It’s very hot in summer, but you can relaxing on a beach on Fire Island, only about two hours from Manhattan. It’s usually cool and dry for autumn and there aren’t as many tourists. It’s the perfect time for sightsee and shopping. It often snow in winter and you can go skiing on Hunter Mountain, just north of NYC.
Write soon with your travel plans.

It's great that you can visit us this year.
There are lots of things to do in New York.
You can go to walk in the parks and gardens.
but you can relax on a beach on Fire Island where is only two hours away from Manhattan (Buradan pek emin değilim ama sana ışık olsun diye yazdım.)
It often snows in winter.

Daha fazlada olabilir ben bu kadar buldum kolay gelsin.