İngilizce konuşma sınavı metninde gramer hatası var mi?

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25 Kasım 2020
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We are going holiday to Antalya by car with my family. Our plan is to stay in a hotel in side district and stay for 4 days. I want to enjoy that unlimited meal during the holiday. Also, it would be nice to slide down the slide with my Brother and join the entertainment organized that night, and when the last day comes, we will look back and say goodbye to Antalya.

Hocanın belirlediği kriterlere göre şöyle bir yazı olusturdum gramer hatasi var mi size sormak istedim, İngilizcem 0 da.
 
Holiday'in başına on koysan daha doğru olacak bir de in 'the' side district yaparsan hatasız olur.
 
Side'nin s'si büyük olmalı. Unlimited meal yerine open buffet kullanabilirsin.
We are going on holiday to Antalya by car with my family. Our plan is to stay in a hotel in Alanya district and stay for 4 days. I want to enjoy that open buffet during the holiday. Also, it would be nice to slide down the slide with my brother and join the entertainment organized that night, and when the last day comes,We will leave the hotel and visit my uncle who lives in Konyaaltı. After staying there for 2 days, we will say goodbye to Antalya.

Birde şu şekilde yazdım diğeri kısa geldi biraz daha uzun yazdim rahatsiz ediyorum kusura bakmayin bunda bir gramer hatasi var mi peki ?
Holiday'in başına on koysan daha doğru olacak bir de in 'the' side district yaparsan hatasız olur.
We are going on holiday to Antalya by car with my family. Our plan is to stay in a hotel in Alanya district and stay for 4 days. I want to enjoy that open buffet during the holiday. Also, it would be nice to slide down the slide with my brother and join the entertainment organized that night, and when the last day comes,We will leave the hotel and visit my uncle who lives in Konyaaltı. After staying there for 2 days, we will say goodbye to Antalya.

Peki bunda bir gramer hatasi var mi uzatmam gerektiğini düşündüm kusura bakmayın
 
We are going on holiday to Antalya by car with my family. Our plan is to stay in a hotel in Alanya district and stay for 4 days. I want to enjoy that open buffet during the holiday. Also, it would be nice to SLI'de down the SLI'de with my Brother and join the entertainment organized that night, and when the last day comes, we will leave the hotel and visit my uncle who lives in konyaaltı. After staying there for 2 days, we will say goodbye to Antalya.

Bir de şu şekilde yazdım diğeri kısa geldi biraz daha uzun yazdim rahatsiz ediyorum kusura bakmayin bunda bir gramer hatasi var mi peki?

We are going on holiday to Antalya by car with my family. Our plan is to stay in a hotel in Alanya district and stay for 4 days. I want to enjoy that open buffet during the holiday. Also, it would be nice to SLI'de down the SLI'de with my Brother and join the entertainment organized that night, and when the last day comes, we will leave the hotel and visit my uncle who lives in konyaaltı. After staying there for 2 days, we will say goodbye to Antalya.

Peki bunda bir gramer hatasi var mi uzatmam gerektiğini düşündüm kusura bakmayın.

In' the' Alanya district diye değiştirin tekil bir bölge olduğu başka öyle bir yer olmadığı için the alması lazım başına. Onun dışında grammer hatası bulamadım da internette siteler var onlarda taratabilirsiniz.
 

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