Ingilizce Konuşma Sınavı

lawlaw · 4 Aralık 2019

Yarın ingilizcede konuşma sınavımız olucak. Ögretmenimiz istediğiniz bir konuyu seçin ama çok da basit olmasın dedi ve ben de oyunları seçmek istedim ve kendimce bir metin hazırladım. Sizden isteğim yani ingilizcesi iyi olanlar için söylüyorum. Cümlelerimde tense hataları genel olarak yanlışlarım ya da tavsiyeleriniz var mı? Sonunu tam bağlayamadım. Teşekkür ederim.

Hello, im enes. im going to talk about games and effect of games on the kids. i saw a news on the tv a few days ago. the news about a kid who is injured his friend by father's revolver. His father and mom blamed the games.
But i think this is not about games. This is about the his family. I'm playing games since i was 6 and i didn't injured anyone and i won't of course.
Especially old generations think games make kids agressive. Yes we're playing games which includes war and blood. But we don't like killing each other, we like competitive and challenge. That's why we play war games. Games also have their own abbrevetion like gg and wp. their meanings are good game and well played. if we lose or win the game we use this words to the our rivals after the match. Actually i prefer story games to online games. Because story games includes many things like music, art, architecture and writing skills. I mean games are good.

woitx · 4 Aralık 2019

Kaçıncı Sınıf Çünki Ben Bunları 7.Sınıf da Görüyorum ?

tristessehivernale · 4 Aralık 2019

lawlaw dedi:
Hi everyone, Im Enes. Im gonna talk about Computer Games and effect of Computer Games to the kids. I saw the news on tv a few days ago. The news about a kid who injured his friend by father's revolver. His father and mother blamed the games.

But my opinion is this isnt about the Computer Games. This is about his parents. I also playing Computer Games since when i was 6 and i never injured anyone. Especially old generations thinks Computer Games makes kids agressive. Yes we're playing Computer Games which includes war and blood. But we don't like killing each others, we like competitive and challenge. That's why we play war games.

Computer Games also have their own abbrevetion like "gg" and "wp". Those means are good game and well played. We use those two words to the our rivals after the match. Actually i prefer story games to online games. Because story games includes many things like music, art, architecture and writing skills. I mean Computer Games are good.

Thanks all of you for listening me.

lawlaw · 4 Aralık 2019

woitx dedi:
Kaçıncı Sınıf Çünki Ben Bunları 7.Sınıf da Görüyorum ?

11. sınıfım. Sonuç olarak düzeltmen ya da tavsiyen var mı?
Teşekkür ederim düzeltmelerin için.

woitx · 4 Aralık 2019

lawlaw dedi:
11. sınıfım. Sonuç olarak düzeltmen ya da tavsiyen var mı?
Teşekkür ederim düzeltmelerin için.

Valla yanlışın yok gibi gözüküyor Sınavda başarılar.

Artorias74 · 4 Aralık 2019

Grammar hataları var ''The news is about a kid who injured his friend by his father's revolver. ''This is about his family.'' ''I didn't injure anyone'' ''We're playing games which include war and blood'' ''We use these words to our rivals after the match. ''Because story games include many things'' Dediklerim gibi düzelt.

lawlaw · 4 Aralık 2019

Artorias74 dedi:
Grammar hataları var ''The news is about a kid who injured his friend by his father's revolver. ''This is about his family.'' ''I didn't injure anyone'' ''We're playing games which include war and blood'' ''We use these words to our rivals after the match. ''Because story games include many things'' Dediklerim gibi düzelt.

Teşekkür ederim.
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